@srinikamathur said in #21:
> Hi guys, we've improved the poem a little, we've made it bigger with the help of
@sriyamathur.
>
> The World
>
> When the world was first built,
> It was like heaven but naught.
> They sing and blow the flute,
> They don't even have anything to have bought.
>
> Then the happy days are over,
> Our sins crawl the Earth.
> People call others losers,
> While they themselves rot.
>
> The outside world is full of sorrow,
> Nobody bothers about a rabbit's burrow,
> People are busy with their jobs,
> And women care about the knobs.
>
> Nature dies every day,
> Dies due to the world!
> What is that eerie sound we hear?
> It is the wail of Nature, we fear.
>
> Animals lose their homes,
> 'Cause people make homes and domes,
> It's not fair!
> What's happened to the world, oh dear!
> The world only cares for people,
> People only care for themselves,
> While around them Nature dies!
>
> Mother Earth wails in sorrow,
> As little animals lose their home hollow,
> Oh, what happened to the world?
> Mother Earth wails.
>
> The outside world is full of sadness
> Nobody cares about the gladness
> They just go on with their jobs
> And think how to fix their door and safe knobs.
>
> They only care for themselves
> And never help others
> Seeing the poor people
> They just ignore
> And wave them away
> Not caring about their health
> And asking if they have got any other wealth
>
> We have cut the trees
> CHOP! CHOP! CHOP!
> We hear the trees cut
> We have killed the animals
> Not caring they go extinct
>
> Only a few people on the Earth
> Are trying to fix this by making laws
> But people do not care about the laws
> And go on harming Nature
>
> The world is destroyed,
> We cannot and would not stand by and watch,
> But what can we do?
> Oh God, save us all.
>
> -credit to
@ChocolatePudding123, me (
@srinikamathur), and
@sriyamathur.
>
> Plz rate out of 100!
Job & knob takes it from a 89.7 /100 to 95.4
good job
